My ultimate adventure.


One day, I walked to the Dubai desert. I rode on camels, donkeys and horses. They were really fast. I walked and walked till I reached the city. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name, “Hashim, Hashim!”

“Baraa, is that you?!” I can’t believe it , why is he here? He needed me. His brother wanted to race me in a rally car. I couldn’t believe it. My first time meeting the champion. I went to build a rally car and I tuned it up a bit. I went to practice on the rally track. I got better and better. The next we raced. No one knew I had a nitro boost. The worst part was that I lost but that was my ultimate adventure.

  1. #1 by Mr Vaughan on March 24, 2015 - 10:27 am

    till should be until.

    ‘The next we’ doesn’t make sense.

  2. #2 by h on March 24, 2015 - 10:29 am

    One day, I walked to the Dubai desert. I rode on camels, donkeys and horses. They were really fast. I walked and walked until I reached the city. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name, “Hashim, Hashim!”

    “Baraa, is that you?!” I can’t believe it , why is he here? He needed me. His brother wanted to race me in a rally car. I couldn’t believe it. My first time meeting the champion. I went to build a rally car and I tuned it up a bit. I went to practice on the rally track. I got better and better. The next day we raced. No one knew I had a nitro boost. The worst part was that I lost but that was my ultimate adventure.

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