My Ultimate Adventure!!!


I’m sir Ranulf, I will do a challenge that is a huge risk for me.I have to run across Niagara falls and across a huge desert before week and Iam only 71 and I have been doing challenges all my life!I can not ruin this for me.Right now Iam going to start running now there are lots of cameras around me and I am all ready to sweat its starting in 321… I am just near Niagara Falls I think I should have a break beside the water.After a while I got up and stared running again.Finally I have I have reached the end of the desert I have fineshed!!!

  1. #1 by Mr Vaughan on March 24, 2015 - 10:24 am

    Before week?
    Only 71? 71 is old.
    Does I can not ruin this for me make sense?
    Sentence that starts ‘Right..’ needs splitting into sentences as does the one after it.

  2. #2 by e on March 24, 2015 - 10:33 am

    I’m sir Ranulf, I will do a challenge that is a huge risk for me.I have to run across Niagara falls and across a huge desert before week and Iam 71 and I have been doing challenges all my life!
    Right now I am going to start running now. There are lots of cameras around me and I am all ready to sweat! It’s starting in 321… I am just near Niagara Falls. I think I should have a break beside the water.After a while I got up and stared running again.Finally I have I have reached the end of the desert I have fineshed!!!

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